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Leftovers

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Not that the ambulance men look like white vultures, but
I can see them stooping over the roadkill that
they peck at with needles and monitor leads,
not that it'll do any good because
I can see its eyes bleed every time
they pump what's left of its ribcage,
not from hope but procedure.
I wave through the black van;
they lift it on, shrug,
"Not much left there,
I'm afraid."
They cried
not.
A lucky strike in the forum. An exercise with starting words of each line being 'They', 'Not', or 'I'.

Descending syllable count.
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AmityBlackbird's avatar
An incredible mating of structure and personal observation. Your gallery is so refreshing after the billions of badly rhyming attempts all over the site.