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-1-
night chills
black sky, black sea
one light blinking
-2-
boys watching snowflakes
melting
on her bare legs
-3-
Poole Park:
white grass, black trees
and grey water
-4-
gathered on the street corner
four snowmen
-5-
eddies in the wind
snow rising
past my window
-6-
dragging his shoes
the child leaves longer prints
than his mother
-7-
night time
a crisp packet
scraping along the road
-8-
pawprints
in the dew
on my car
-9-
solid lake
ducks staring
silently
-10-
thrushes
smashing snails
on Stonehenge
-11-
giant pigeons
dancing cats
youtube
-12-
running across
the iced lake
two foxes
-13-
expecting nature
to behave naturally -
how silly of me!
-14-
the cleaner
kicks cockroaches
along the corridor
-15-
my apartment
and trees
islands in the fog
-16-
night time
the howling of dogs
and drunks
-17-
by the 14th green
a golf ball hides
in a fresh cow pat
night chills
black sky, black sea
one light blinking
-2-
boys watching snowflakes
melting
on her bare legs
-3-
Poole Park:
white grass, black trees
and grey water
-4-
gathered on the street corner
four snowmen
-5-
eddies in the wind
snow rising
past my window
-6-
dragging his shoes
the child leaves longer prints
than his mother
-7-
night time
a crisp packet
scraping along the road
-8-
pawprints
in the dew
on my car
-9-
solid lake
ducks staring
silently
-10-
thrushes
smashing snails
on Stonehenge
-11-
giant pigeons
dancing cats
youtube
-12-
running across
the iced lake
two foxes
-13-
expecting nature
to behave naturally -
how silly of me!
-14-
the cleaner
kicks cockroaches
along the corridor
-15-
my apartment
and trees
islands in the fog
-16-
night time
the howling of dogs
and drunks
-17-
by the 14th green
a golf ball hides
in a fresh cow pat
Snow, snow, snow, and more snow.
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day 1: spot on, the role of a beacon epitomized.
day 2: ooh sensual, imagine the girl with bare legs out in the cold winter air! and boys ogling at the snowflakes? hmmm...
day 4: it's sort of comical. i wonder who did that, maybe some amateur sculptor who's dying to have their artwork noticed.
day 8: i just loved this one. the trail of something just gone not long ago, much like the art of haiku itself; it records trivials that become memorable once put in writing.
day 9: the birds must be wondering about their swimming pool turning into skating rink!
day 12: and our skating rink is so happening!
day 15: wow, the imagery strikes! immediately i see the buildings and the trees stuck out as black silhouette in the midst of moving mist!
day 17: lol! how did you get the cow to graze in the golf field?! lol!
why is this in the scrap? not good enough? i think it is a very competent set
anyway, i notice you have minimal use of punctuations, why?
day 2: ooh sensual, imagine the girl with bare legs out in the cold winter air! and boys ogling at the snowflakes? hmmm...
day 4: it's sort of comical. i wonder who did that, maybe some amateur sculptor who's dying to have their artwork noticed.
day 8: i just loved this one. the trail of something just gone not long ago, much like the art of haiku itself; it records trivials that become memorable once put in writing.
day 9: the birds must be wondering about their swimming pool turning into skating rink!
day 12: and our skating rink is so happening!
day 15: wow, the imagery strikes! immediately i see the buildings and the trees stuck out as black silhouette in the midst of moving mist!
day 17: lol! how did you get the cow to graze in the golf field?! lol!
why is this in the scrap? not good enough? i think it is a very competent set
anyway, i notice you have minimal use of punctuations, why?